How is love presented in neutral tones by Thomas Hardy?

May 12, 2016 / / 0 Comments

In this poem in presents love as a curse what follows him around .

This poem Is about a man , what remember the negative parts of he’s  past relationships the positive he can’t think of . When the two separate he felt like it was not worth it . At the end of poem he’s telling you how there broke up . Neutral  tones has a poem rhymes is a,b,b, a rhythm scram.

A example of Thomas Hardy creating negatively in poem is ” pond that winter day ” if a couple walking by a pond it’s normally describe as positive ,however  it’s not present that way. You can tell that there relationship is is falling apart ,as he stand by pond you could fell the tension between these two . He was the victim in there relationship as he was not respect.  “We stond ” there are using past tense this shows how it’s going to end bad , but he can’t get the bad memories out his head . The season is during winter and the fact that he has mentioned this suggests that it is a bad memory due to the fact that cold, winter days are known to be dull and miserable. This makes a link to how the love may have been quite negative and how there was no real bond. This also links to how the love may be portrayed as a curse as curses generally represent negative things.  The fact that Thomas Hardy has mentioned riddles explains how their love may have been similar as they find it hard to understand and crack each other which is also the same scenario in a riddle

“the sun was white as, though chidden of God ” Chidden is of language for told of , it’s deeper than that it’s how God tells them off ,if God tell you of about your relationship it’s most be serious. Them days people where very religions and followed the bible , by saying the sun was drifting apart this how both of them was link together but when there drifting .

The next line use personification, to say how the ground was starving this link  to  quotation “leaves  lay on the starving sod “This creates the feeling how the leaves are malnourished  this link to there relationship how its died because there both don’t try at all she lost all her feeling for him . It was like there didn’t realise each other was there standing looking at ducks.

Another way in which Thomas Hardy has presented love as a curse would be by mentioning ‘love deceives’. This quotation also makes a link to a negative type theme through the word ‘deceive’. This word explains how their relationship was full of lies and how they were untrustworthy as they may have been doing things behind each others backs. This is a use of a metaphor because of how love cannot physically deceive but instead Thomas Hardy has compared it to their relationship in order to inform the reader of what type of relationship these two people share in the poem. The love can also be seen as curse as deceitfulness consists of lies and trickery and that can also be seen in curses.

Thomas hardy says how her smile was dead “mouth was the deadest thing ” this shows that her smile was alive for a sec than it died . ow the smile on the other persons face was fake and how there was no real bond in love between them. The fact that it was a fake smile can also show how their relationship was also fake as well but looked good from the outside similar to the smile. Also, the word bitterness shows how it was cutting into him and effecting him strongly similar to that of a lemon . This can be link to how it’s haunted or a curse  I link this to relationships how it’s wasn’t strong  and it was fake all of it now he thinks there a curse upon on he’s relationship .

In conclusion, I believe that Thomas Hardy has used the theme of their relationship  to prove his ponit that there were curse on them and how she had the strength to end their relationship to show how it ends  the way he use lots language devices this what I believe he wanted the neutral tones to make the reader feel how he does about this relationship.

Comparison Essay

March 18, 2016 / / 0 Comments

 

In this essay ill be talking about into the wild and how the novel presents, his family and compare with film by Penn’s. Into the wild is about novel by Krakauer its about a young man, how just graduated  collage and he’s hole life was in head of him Christopher McCandless very smart but different from everyone else he show by him jumping on stage also money didn’t mean a lot to him. 1992 McCandless went hitchhiked to Alaska hes family and no contact with love -ones in the end he ends ups died. This would make identifying range languages and quotations explain the link between film and novel.

he is also showing that he is rebbeling By burning his money he is showing that he is not willing to follow with society and saying that this money is useless and causes people pain in their lives suggesting money is depraved.Christopher McCandless was a 23 year old man who set out to the wild for his personal ambition a year later he was found dead. both jon Krakuer and Sean Penn have interpreted McCandless’s story in their personal way krakeur making a book and Penn in making a movie. in this essay I will be analysing the comparison between McCanless’s family and McMcandless himself in the book and the film.

In the film presents Walt McCandless as a world apart from his son whereas the novel present Walt and chriss as sharing similar core characteristics in the film when the sports team entrance the other shoulder shot walt’s reaction was a similar shot as Chris McCandless the film shows this all by camera shots  meanwhile in novel McCandless called unusual gifts into wild this languages devices as metaphor a human cant be a gift hes more than a gift he a gift to world but McCandless didn’t want to turn out like he’s father how cheated on his mother. McCandless couldn’t forgive he’s father in the film he’s says that he’s there family going be in pain for next years as he goes on his journeys travel to Alaska.

In Sean Penns’s film, it presents bille McCandless (his mother ) as a fake person on the other hand the mover present Bille as loving and caring person . A example in the film when Bille wants to buy Chris McCandless   I new car (Datsun) car it’s very expensive and he’s parents couldn’t be seen with there son in that car there standers and very ugly McCandless  parents was about statuses how Chris’s look and his car . However the novel presents Bille as loving person “Bille as nice person who made blanket for him” this blanket McCandless died I think McCandless brought this blanket on he’s journeys to remember he’s mother (Bille)  McCandless just want to punish his father. Example in film of walt buying Chris McCandless a new car ,when camera shots of he’s parents talking about new car the director did a Point view shot to shows, he’s old Datsun the other shot was other the shoulder shot to see he’s reaction of Chris’s McCandless start getting very  aggressive to his love-ones when carine had to pinch his leg make him calm down McCandless has mood swings when he’s parents talk about ,money  it’s get to Chris he’s didn’t want to fit in to world he want stand out by going into the wild no money .

The  way the film presents McCandless as a rude and disrespectful child as he rebellions against he’s towards his family. McCandless says there many reasons why Chris goes into the wild and very complicated . examples in film and novel the same when Walt and Bille send letters “when the family send letters he sent them send back to postoffice” This shows how Chris McCandless was rebellions to his parents why did McCandless do this ? He want to state his point that he doesn’t need his parents I think that McCandless wanted to show to he’s love-ones that there didn’t respect him and money wouldn’t buy that for him .

McCandless and his parents was not close at all his mother Bille try so hard to have a close relationship with Chris.  Walt didn’t try at all the thing what destroy relationship was parents business ,there was so busy didn’t think about there children. Walt and Bille argued about money was not a good inference how a married couple.

Into the wild present Chris McCandless as courageous and adventurous young man who want to discover what life is out in wilderness.  Age 24 he’s family expect a boy like him to graduated from university and go out in world to work to earn his own money ,he give the $24,500 money to charity this when he started to discover world he’s future change. Carine (his sister) is presented as a loyal sister to Christopher because she knows how there journey with family was hard. Carine had a hard time when  Chris was gone  she watch her walt and bille argue film she was very vulnerable indeed of fatherly figures shes has none to cry on or to guide her threw her life .presents Walt violent as hits Bille she drop on seat  the novel never showed Walt as humble but just was a loyal husband cheated on Bille and has a son older than Chris Mcandless that  pissed of Chris that what made him go into wild and never returned . This Chris pride was very high he didnt want to call his parents to let them know where  he is, he didn’t want to be embarrassed them but he didn’t realise how much pain there were going threw stressful time to shows his feeling .

Chris is shower in the film “as behaving negatively towards his parents ” This when he walk into the hall to celebrate his graduation. The novel shows how he is a caring person because for mother day Bille say she was surprised McCandless don’t believe buying presents for mother and that was his first time in two years.

In this film there present McCandless as he can’t get along with his family “preferred people on the road than his real family ” Chris didn’t like his family accept Carine the example from film he had a drink with his manger . McCandless even sent them letter to tell her doing but not to his family. This was selfish behaviour when he was going to died he   Most had flashback about his family.

In  conclusion the family

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Krakauer Panic

February 9, 2016 / / 0 Comments

Meaning
A)
Jon krakauer climb nearly seven hundred feet of altitude before he steep of glacier

B) ” time was plastered over the rock to a thickness of two or three feet, so I kept plugging upwards “this give krakauer he’s confidence to keeping climbing

C)
The frost feathers where five inches thick and a structure of a stale bread
D)
Joh krakauer had to climb back down because he was hitting rock and hand now where else to go and, the frost feathers very light

Tone
A
I. A noun phrase Is a frost feathers this because it a noun built up on one word that distance make him scared
II)
“Cards” the adjective what describe when Jon krakauer says “the sour taste of panic rose in my throat ”
This describes his feeling on him being on the ices that can’t hold his weight
III)

Chapter summary 9&10

November 13, 2015 / / 0 Comments

Lanyons letter explains that Hyde drank the potion and what transformed into Jekyll in front of him . This was shocking that Jekyll and Hyde are the same person caused Lanyons death.
Jekyll confession reveals that he turned into Hyde without meaning to in the park he wrote to Lanyons asking for his help to retrieve the ingredients he needed for his potion

chapter scene summary 8

November 7, 2015 / / 0 Comments

This chapter start with Mr pole knocking on Mr Utter-son door having a talk there went out to take a walk down the road it was a peaceful day there was walking and I could hear the sounds of someone screaming for DR Jekyll basement it was like someone was being murdered but Mr Utter-son walk towards door he try to kick it down and he keep on trying the door finally door drop down mr utter-son rush in looking around he saw a died body on the ground with like liquid all other him . Right next to the died body there was a letter from Dr Jekyll to Mr Utter-son explains how he will he left for Mr Hyde he change it to Mr Utter-son leaving everything to him , he explain how he could go missing or he could be died so he left everything to him even Mr utter-son took the letter and out it in hes safe. He went to call the police and show everything

Reading project book r Sir Alex Ferguson

November 5, 2015 / / 0 Comments

I’ll have completed reading this book to success about how Alex Ferguson was success manger this book tells you about 38 years of success. its autobiography explain where he start from to he road it a good book it would wanna make you be successful and want you pass in everything you do keep you motivated going what you do this book was basic on 26 year of football manger Manchester United club he made them win a lot of trophy by he talking and team work it show how he cares about bring hes team when i have mt presentations i can explain how he help me to work harder and hope what i want

gothic setting

October 23, 2015 / / 0 Comments

It was a  cold night in the church .I was praying in the church, the light started flicking and  a ghost started talking. i was hearing sounds i start screaming and shouting as the wind started getting powerful pushing down the bells. All the church windows moving  shaking… it just turns black i could feel the ghost breathing on my neck

i was still praying when he heard the sound of the bell then i heard i strange sound that the Church doesn’t normally make. you could taste the horror in my mouth  with the bitter taste . The tension was building foot steps coming close and closer  i felt very discomfort  i drop on my knees and water pouring out my eyes  , he saw the candle flicking with a hand just over it was mad i kicked  open the door and where trees surrounding the whole place ….it was like i was in hell  stress full nothing was there but felt like eyes was watching me i started running around the Conner.

the gushy wind with the ghosts blowing all around me i knew i was in danger the  tress when moving towards me it was like their are real talking making sound i keep walking into the blackest of the light i heard a loud bang i looked back i saw something suspicious behind me  i just keep on running threw the mud my trainers where dirty as  horse  stable you could. i was reaching to get out of it then step into shit  i thinking today wasn’t my day . I keep on walking but i could feel like i was tiny someone tall standing over me i could hear there breathing heavily with there saliva dripping down my neck  could smell there didn’t brush there teeth. I could still smell that smell just hit my noise it was to strong but then i realize it was me i was abandoned but in the distance  i could  hear a house door creaking  and see a house in the   with bright lies on this is not good I slowly walk in to the house it was dark and painful windows smash with the glass on the floor every where with blood dripping for the roof top it was like someones hard but something bad just happen it looks like someone came to destroy this place see eyes but this thing had 4 legs it red eyes were devils popping out you wouldn’t think this was real you could hear the thing breathing very hard the smell to strong smelt like a sewage very strong. I open the door it just drop off it was a mess i try to switch n the light but didn’t work but then started flicking the monster came closer then it just drop down it was mad i was jogging up the stairs then i drop threw the stairs it was stressful felt like broke my bones couldn’t move i was stuck .
Although that monster came and help me so it work .

Recommendation for Position of Prefect

May 14, 2015 / / 0 Comments

I have known Kadece since he started at the school in Year 7. In these three years he has demonstrated himself to be a young man of impressive maturity, trustworthiness and commitment.

What sets Kadece out from the crowd is the fact that he manages to secure the respect of both his peers and his teachers in equal measure. This, more than anything else, is a demonstration of his great integrity. He is good-natured, personable and generous. On many occasions in class, Kadece has quietly set about small supportive tasks like calming one of his peers or even simply handing out the books when he can see this is needed. He acts for the greater good without any expectation of recognition for himself.

His calm, responsible ways, paired with his significant influence amongst his peers make him a strong candidate for the role of prefect.

Kadece is an asset to the school and would conduct himself impeccably in all public and representative roles. He has my unreserved recommendation for the role.

Chris Waugh

Essay

May 14, 2015 / / 1 Comment

I am writing an essay to explain   a scene in Hotel Rwanda.  I  will be waiting to explain how the camera shorts and angle would show the view how Paul (the main character)  I will be covering  movement, setting, effect, sound, time and Paul feeling.

The director of hotel Rwanda used lots of film techniques to show how Paul, was feeling. In this  scene close was used to make Paul feel stronger.    on the film  techniques is when the Hutu driver was driving other dead body , shot was level with the angle and mid shot what will give effect how Paul feeling , shock and thinking what that bums driving other the fog, was the setting and  showing us  what he couldn’t see a thing . this would make the view think what is he driving on and that Paul would know before views showing the colour went dark with the sky, going dark using setting and weather. Paul body was in fear , because he didn’t know what was happening in that moment.

The  director  is showing Paul body get tight and close together in a shot when he drop out the van, it was a live action and the sound when he drops. director use a level shot , mid shot this will make Paul see what he drop  however had to be a huge fall because he was out of scene just his hand van  this effect made the views think some bad was happening, Paul was in shock and fear you could tell by his body , the bodies make Paul felt guilt because of everything seeing bodies to the end of the road. Movement was tracking shot following where he would go.

Mid shot was preventing views to see the bodies  this effect  help them to  make them think what Paul was thinking his self. In this  its a close up with a girl murder level shot the sound was non-dietetic sound ,mournful African music and a machete sound for shock of the bodies saying their murder by a machete very hard to sync in but the close give the effect how everything was all adding up . this would bring fear to views and have an impact make views think what’s happening .

In the film the effect of all of them help by it adding up together by making views be thinking of the fear what was Paul was felling. the hope point was to make Paul see everything before  the view could use lots of techniques for the views to see  example when Paul friend  was driving other all the body, he made the camera shot see his face expression thinking he is going to drop in river.