Kadece's English Journal

In this poem in presents love as a curse what follows him around .

This poem Is about a man , what remember the negative parts of he’s  past relationships the positive he can’t think of . When the two separate he felt like it was not worth it . At the end of poem he’s telling you how there broke up . Neutral  tones has a poem rhymes is a,b,b, a rhythm scram.

A example of Thomas Hardy creating negatively in poem is ” pond that winter day ” if a couple walking by a pond it’s normally describe as positive ,however  it’s not present that way. You can tell that there relationship is is falling apart ,as he stand by pond you could fell the tension between these two . He was the victim in there relationship as he was not respect.  “We stond ” there are using past tense this shows how it’s going to end bad , but he can’t get the bad memories out his head . The season is during winter and the fact that he has mentioned this suggests that it is a bad memory due to the fact that cold, winter days are known to be dull and miserable. This makes a link to how the love may have been quite negative and how there was no real bond. This also links to how the love may be portrayed as a curse as curses generally represent negative things.  The fact that Thomas Hardy has mentioned riddles explains how their love may have been similar as they find it hard to understand and crack each other which is also the same scenario in a riddle

“the sun was white as, though chidden of God ” Chidden is of language for told of , it’s deeper than that it’s how God tells them off ,if God tell you of about your relationship it’s most be serious. Them days people where very religions and followed the bible , by saying the sun was drifting apart this how both of them was link together but when there drifting .

The next line use personification, to say how the ground was starving this link  to  quotation “leaves  lay on the starving sod “This creates the feeling how the leaves are malnourished  this link to there relationship how its died because there both don’t try at all she lost all her feeling for him . It was like there didn’t realise each other was there standing looking at ducks.

Another way in which Thomas Hardy has presented love as a curse would be by mentioning ‘love deceives’. This quotation also makes a link to a negative type theme through the word ‘deceive’. This word explains how their relationship was full of lies and how they were untrustworthy as they may have been doing things behind each others backs. This is a use of a metaphor because of how love cannot physically deceive but instead Thomas Hardy has compared it to their relationship in order to inform the reader of what type of relationship these two people share in the poem. The love can also be seen as curse as deceitfulness consists of lies and trickery and that can also be seen in curses.

Thomas hardy says how her smile was dead “mouth was the deadest thing ” this shows that her smile was alive for a sec than it died . ow the smile on the other persons face was fake and how there was no real bond in love between them. The fact that it was a fake smile can also show how their relationship was also fake as well but looked good from the outside similar to the smile. Also, the word bitterness shows how it was cutting into him and effecting him strongly similar to that of a lemon . This can be link to how it’s haunted or a curse  I link this to relationships how it’s wasn’t strong  and it was fake all of it now he thinks there a curse upon on he’s relationship .

In conclusion, I believe that Thomas Hardy has used the theme of their relationship  to prove his ponit that there were curse on them and how she had the strength to end their relationship to show how it ends  the way he use lots language devices this what I believe he wanted the neutral tones to make the reader feel how he does about this relationship.

In this essay ill be talking about into the wild and how the novel presents, his family and compare with film by Penn’s. Into the wild is about novel by Krakauer its about a young man, how just graduated  collage and he’s hole life was in head of him Christopher McCandless very smart but different from everyone else he show by him jumping on stage also money didn’t mean a lot to him. 1992 McCandless went hitchhiked to Alaska hes family and no contact with love -ones in the end he ends ups died. This would make identifying range languages and quotations explain the link between film and novel.

In the film presents Walt McCandless as a world apart from his son whereas the novel present Walt and chriss as sharing similar core characteristics in the film when the sports team entrance the other shoulder shot walt’s reaction was a similar shot as Chris McCandless the film shows this all by camera shots  meanwhile in novel McCandless called unusual gifts into wild this languages devices as metaphor a human cant be a gift hes more than a gift he a gift to world but McCandless didn’t want to turn out like he’s father how cheated on his mother. McCandless couldn’t forgive he’s father in the film he’s says that he’s there family going be in pain for next years as he goes on his journeys travel to Alaska.

In Sean Penns’s film, it presents bille McCandless (his mother ) as a fake person on the other hand the mover present Bille as loving and caring person . A example in the film when Bille wants to buy Chris McCandless   I new car (Datsun) car it’s very expensive and he’s parents couldn’t be seen with there son in that car there standers and very ugly McCandless  parents was about statuses how Chris’s look and his car . However the novel presents Bille as loving person “Bille as nice person who made blanket for him” this blanket McCandless died I think McCandless brought this blanket on he’s journeys to remember he’s mother (Bille)  McCandless just want to punish his father. Example in film of walt buying Chris McCandless a new car ,when camera shots of he’s parents talking about new car the director did a Point view shot to shows, he’s old Datsun the other shot was other the shoulder shot to see he’s reaction of Chris’s McCandless start getting very  aggressive to his love-ones when carine had to pinch his leg make him calm down McCandless has mood swings when he’s parents talk about ,money  it’s get to Chris he’s didn’t want to fit in to world he want stand out by going into the wild no money .

The  way the film presents McCandless as a rude and disrespectful child as he rebellions against he’s towards his family. McCandless says there many reasons why Chris goes into the wild and very complicated . examples in film and novel the same when Walt and Bille send letters “when the family send letters he sent them send back to postoffice” This shows how Chris McCandless was rebellions to his parents why did McCandless do this ? He want to state his point that he doesn’t need his parents I think that McCandless wanted to show to he’s love-ones that there didn’t respect him and money wouldn’t buy that for him .

McCandless and his parents was not close at all his mother Bille try so hard to have a close relationship with Chris.  Walt didn’t try at all the thing what destroy relationship was parents business ,there was so busy didn’t think about there children. Walt and Bille argued about money was not a good inference how a married couple.

Into the wild present Chris McCandless as courageous and adventurous young man who want to discover what life is out in wilderness.  Age 24 he’s family expect a boy like him to graduated from university and go out in world to work to earn his own money ,he give the $24,500 money to charity this when he started to discover world he’s future change. Carine (his sister) is presented as a loyal sister to Christopher because she knows how there journey with family was hard. Carine had a hard time when  Chris was gone  she watch her walt and bille argue film she was very vulnerable indeed of fatherly figures shes has none to cry on or to guide her threw her life .presents Walt violent as hits Bille she drop on seat  the novel never showed Walt as humble but just was a loyal husband cheated on Bille and has a son older than Chris Mcandless that  pissed of Chris that what made him go into wild and never returned . This Chris pride was very high he didnt want to call his parents to let them know where  he is, he didn’t want to be embarrassed them but he didn’t realise how much pain there were going threw stressful time to shows his feeling .

Chris is shower in the film “as behaving negatively towards his parents ” This when he walk into the hall to celebrate his graduation. The novel shows how he is a caring person because for mother day Bille say she was surprised McCandless don’t believe buying presents for mother and that was his first time in two years.

In this film there present McCandless as he can’t get along with his family “preferred people on the road than his real family ” Chris didn’t like his family accept Carine the example from film he had a drink with his manger . McCandless even sent them letter to tell her doing but not to his family. This was selfish behaviour when he was going to died he   Most had flashback about his family.

In  conclusion the family

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Jon krakauer climb nearly seven hundred feet of altitude before he steep of glacier