It was a bright cold day in April. The clocks were striking thirteen.Winston smith,his chin nuzzled into his Brest.In an effort to escape the vile wind.slipped quickly through the glass shine doors of. Victory mansion.Thought not quick enough to. Prevent a swirl of gritty dust entering along witty him.
November 16, 2012 at 2:09 pm
Kadece,
You’ve made a good start on this – with the first two sentences correctly simplified.
After that you haven’t managed to simplify the piece enough, for example: “Winston Smith, his chin nuzzled into his breast” is not a complete sentence – do you know why?
The same is the case with: “slipped quickly through the glass shine doors of” – can you see why?
If you can’t, get me to help so that you can fix it up, before you move on to the next task.
Mr Waugh