Colin changed,when he meet a guy called ted he was gay and he had a boyfriend called Griff had aids, but Colin spent two weeks with ted . “Colin found him on a block said crying them he ask when he ask the block was just you have to let all out somethimes”
That he change when ted said that he has to see luck because he not went him to die with out gim
March 18, 2013 at 8:03 pm
This is clear thinking and your example is excellent – I’d like to do some work with you on the spelling aspect of your writing, do you have some after school time where we can do this?
Mr Waugh